Is it pleasure? Is it pain?
Is it all that I can lose? Is it just what I can gain?
Is it the bed? Is it the glimpse of dreams?
Is it the grip of moist palms? Is it the whisper of screams?
Is it the endless talks? Is it the quiet walks?
Is it the shores of sea? Is it a bed of rocks?
Is it my identity? Is it my solitude?
Is it the hint of arrogance? Is it a mix of gratitude?
Is it some stroke of luck? Is it the dance of destiny?
Is it an inherited life? Is it a self-built epiphany?
Is it me? Is it you?
Is it just me? Is it just you?
Adios !
Puru
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mmmuuuaaahhh....
i hate to write this but love the fact more that the time spend with you is always a treasure to keep...
I'm already in love wit ur writing skills Puru... This post is again an arrestin abstract piece which reflects ur amazin parallel processin n abstract thinkin capabilities !!! I cud visualize every bit as i went thru' each line..da mumbai vicious attack description was so conductive n da poem concluding da post serves as da dessert.... Beautifully written.... :)
but promise me a merry n vivacious post soon.. :)
2.05 am:(..books shut,
yet,with all the data n theories kung foo fighting in the sulcii of my grey matter,i read this one--details!!
excellently written[like all others],,and a bit of humour there with the ironic details just completed the package.
d poem?im still pondering over it!
d experience?
--seems the beginning of a new romance..d blogs will keep bringing me back..
we shall not cease from exploration.....
:)!!
So true. i am in awe of the way you write. Genuinely simple,yet immense,soul gazing!! The way you penned down the sounds of the cocophonic events in mumbai in words was visually comprehendible. What happened was really sad. The poem consummates the post terrifically.
So true!! I am in awe of the way you write. Genuinely simple,yet immense,soul gazing!! The way you penned down the sounds of the cocophonic events in mumbai was visually comprehendible. What happened was really sad. The poem consummates the post terrifically.
Interesting post.. I like your writing style.
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